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Have you ever had a goal ? Of course you have and my
goal is to be a better writer by the end of this semester. I want to be able to
write better than I ever wrote before.
What I mean by this I want to improve my grammar, sentence structures
and my transitional sentences need to flow better. To show my improvements I
will receive an A in my writing class. Another thing I will notice is my fear
of writing will go away and I will write with more confidence. These tasks must
be achieved in order for me to become a better writer.
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I need to improve in all categories of writing. First my grammar has to get better by me showing more effort into reading, instead of me doing other things. While I’m on the computer doing non productive things I can be studying or reading. Also when I’m texting I will stop abbreviating everything. Next I need to improve my sentence structures. My comma usage needs to improve so my sentences could be more sophisticated. I do not make a lot of run on sentences but I want to lower it to none. The last thing I need to improve in is organization and I plan to improve it by getting extra help. One way is getting help from the school, which means going to the writing center instead of the gym. The writing center has tutors their to help me with writing papers and may even teach me a new technique to writing these upcoming papers. Another way is getting help from my fellow classmates. Thanks to my teachers we have ways to contact anyone if we need help, like through a text, email and on their blogs. Those are all substantial changes needed to be done if I want to improve my writing.
I need to improve in all categories of writing. First my grammar has to get better by me showing more effort into reading, instead of me doing other things. While I’m on the computer doing non productive things I can be studying or reading. Also when I’m texting I will stop abbreviating everything. Next I need to improve my sentence structures. My comma usage needs to improve so my sentences could be more sophisticated. I do not make a lot of run on sentences but I want to lower it to none. The last thing I need to improve in is organization and I plan to improve it by getting extra help. One way is getting help from the school, which means going to the writing center instead of the gym. The writing center has tutors their to help me with writing papers and may even teach me a new technique to writing these upcoming papers. Another way is getting help from my fellow classmates. Thanks to my teachers we have ways to contact anyone if we need help, like through a text, email and on their blogs. Those are all substantial changes needed to be done if I want to improve my writing.
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In order to show my improvement I must receive a good grade from my writing class. As I look forward to improving my writing during this class, I must give it my all. I know its not going to be a easy road, but I am fully capable of making this change. Right now I am struggling to write this paper because I am easily distracted and not giving it my best. This class is testing my dedication to get better at writing. I must communicate with my teacher so she can guide me on the right path of becoming a better writer. As this class progress, if my grades increase steadily. Then my writing is improving, but if it decreases that means this paper means nothing and I lied to myself and you. I know that I am going to get a high grade in this class.
In order to show my improvement I must receive a good grade from my writing class. As I look forward to improving my writing during this class, I must give it my all. I know its not going to be a easy road, but I am fully capable of making this change. Right now I am struggling to write this paper because I am easily distracted and not giving it my best. This class is testing my dedication to get better at writing. I must communicate with my teacher so she can guide me on the right path of becoming a better writer. As this class progress, if my grades increase steadily. Then my writing is improving, but if it decreases that means this paper means nothing and I lied to myself and you. I know that I am going to get a high grade in this class.
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Another way I would know I improved my writing is my anxiety for writing lessen. When I was in elementary school I was the worst writer in most of my classes. I would try my best to avoid writing by acting out in class. I would be a class clown hiding the problem which was I couldn't write. I was not a bad student, I just wasn't disciplined enough to keep trying instead of giving up. My mother tried to get me extra help like a tutor and putting me in the learning center called Scores. It helped me improve a little but not as much as I would have liked so I gave up on myself. In math I was a 90 student most my life. Math was my favorite subject because I was confident and good at it. Because I was so bad at writing, it became more of a fear to me. As I got to junior high school nothing changed for me. I still was barely passing my writing classes but in math and other subjects I was doing well. My confidence in writing was real low. Being a competitive type of child, I was not happy that the other students in class were better than me when I was better in every other subject. My family is very competitive with each other. I was compared to my cousin in school every year. He had better grades than me mostly every year. I want to be confident in my writing and I will gain that confidence.
Another way I would know I improved my writing is my anxiety for writing lessen. When I was in elementary school I was the worst writer in most of my classes. I would try my best to avoid writing by acting out in class. I would be a class clown hiding the problem which was I couldn't write. I was not a bad student, I just wasn't disciplined enough to keep trying instead of giving up. My mother tried to get me extra help like a tutor and putting me in the learning center called Scores. It helped me improve a little but not as much as I would have liked so I gave up on myself. In math I was a 90 student most my life. Math was my favorite subject because I was confident and good at it. Because I was so bad at writing, it became more of a fear to me. As I got to junior high school nothing changed for me. I still was barely passing my writing classes but in math and other subjects I was doing well. My confidence in writing was real low. Being a competitive type of child, I was not happy that the other students in class were better than me when I was better in every other subject. My family is very competitive with each other. I was compared to my cousin in school every year. He had better grades than me mostly every year. I want to be confident in my writing and I will gain that confidence.
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In conclusion my goal is to improve as a writer. Some ways I can do that is improving my grammar, sentence structures and my transitional sentences. To show for all my hard work I should receive a good grade in this writing class. Another way i would know i accomplish this goal if my fear of writing diminishes and i will feel new confidence in myself. All this will show I have met my goal.
In conclusion my goal is to improve as a writer. Some ways I can do that is improving my grammar, sentence structures and my transitional sentences. To show for all my hard work I should receive a good grade in this writing class. Another way i would know i accomplish this goal if my fear of writing diminishes and i will feel new confidence in myself. All this will show I have met my goal.
I believe i need help with sentence structures and my topic sentence i think need work
ReplyDeleteheyy :].your thesis question definitely catches the readers attention,cause it caught mine.your thesis is very clear of what you where going to talk about and you where every explanatory of what you where talking about you give every details that you could to make the reader understand where you came from and where you want to take your goal but one of the problem with your paper is that you need to cut some words or phrase it differently just so you don't sound like your repeating your self over and over while your explaining how to achieve your goals. for example in your introduction you could phrase it in a different way and cut down some words or change them instead of using command words just to make it sound more stronger if you understand what i mean if not feel free to ask me what i mean by this and ill be glad enough to explain it .
Deleteyour topic sentences are very supportive of your body paragraph which is good you just have to work more on your conclusion in my opium because you where more explanatory on your body paragraphs your conclusion have to be stronger then it sounds now enjoyyyyy!
thank you mike loveeeeee lol :]
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